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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

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Today, there is an
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 amount of
science
student
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students
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 in colleges in a lot of counties. It causes several
problems
 in society. There are
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several reasons
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 and some consequences, so
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 essay will explore them. The first
reason
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this
problems
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 is
lack
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the lack
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 of interest of countries in
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the science
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 area. A lot of countries underrate
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science
.
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,
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USA's
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 army's funding is ten times more than NASA's
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and
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 keeps
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increasing
this
 gap.
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 China gives more budget to
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 firewall" than to its colleges. The second
reason
 comes from the first one, the
lack
 of
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stimulus
 for students to study
science
. Like, when
country
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the country
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 does not pay attention to
science
,
then
, neither do students. Not enough funding means not enough money in universities which will lead to
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lack
 of places on
science
 subjects and scholarships, which are almost the main
reason
 to choose the speciality. There are
also
 some effects on
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society
. First of all, it will cause a deceleration of
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progress
 of society.
Secondly
, it leads to global
problems
 with population, hunger and etc.
Science
 is the motor of technical
progress
 so not enough
science
 students, which leads to
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 of specialists in perspective, will
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 down
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industrial development.
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continuous
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world
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the world
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 population, year by year, we need more resources to feed them
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, give them sufficient comfort
and
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etc. And the only
reason
 why we can give them all they need, despite the geometrical increase of human count in
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the last
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 century, is
science
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progress
. And if we will not continue
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 the same tempo, it will
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cause
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the cause
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of
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world hunger and economical depression. In conclusion,
science
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students
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 are
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important
, because they are
ones
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 who will lead
world
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 to
progress
, and if
government
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the government
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 will not give enough attention to
science
 it will cause global
problems
 in closest decades.
Submitted by 29th of april on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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