The charts below shows the average percentages in typical meals o three types of nutrients l, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below shows the average percentages in typical meals o three types of nutrients l, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The given pie charts compare the nutrients in four different kinds of dishes enjoyed in the USA, which may be harmful if consumed excessively.
Overall
, it is evident from the charts that dinner foods contain significant amounts of
sodium
and saturated fat,
whereas
, snacks consist of large quantities of added
sugar
. In the US, food enjoyed at dinner has a substantial amount of
sodium
and saturated fat, accounting for 43% and 37% respectively.,
However
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dinner meals have a moderate amount of added
sugar
, 23%. ,
Furthermore
breakfast was made up of relatively similar amounts of these nutrients in all four types of meals, all of which were less than a fifth.
In contrast
, the major nutrient in snacks was added
sugar
, with, 42%. ,
However
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snacks contained only 14% and 21% of
sodium
and saturated fat respectively. ,
Also
there is lunch which had slightly more than a quarter of both
sodium
and saturated fat and less than 20% added
sugar
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Saturated fat
  • Trans fat
  • Sodium
  • Carbohydrates
  • Cholesterol
  • Processed foods
  • Nutrient density
  • Dietary guidelines
  • Metabolism
  • Chronic diseases
  • Cardiovascular health
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Hypertension
  • Recommended daily intake (RDI)
  • Nutritional label
  • Food pyramid
  • Balanced diet
  • Health awareness
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