The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates how much the weekly
budget
that families spent in a particular country between 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that families spent most of their weekly budget
on food, while
personal goods
and fuel and power are the least spending budget
in the given time period. The units are measured in percentages.
To begin
with, in 1968, food was the highest spending stood at 35%, while
the smallest was fuel and power at approximately 6%. Moreover
, the proportion of the remaining budget
, 59%, is allocated for housing, clothing and footware
, leisure, transport, personal Correct your spelling
footwear
goods
and household goods
.
Furthermore
, in 2018, leisure was the highest allocation just about 22%, followed by housing just below 20%, then
transport just below 15%. There are decreasing budgets for personal goods
, clothing and footware
and fuel and power, but the biggest change is for food about 18% from 1968 to 2018. Correct your spelling
footwear
In contrast
, there is increasing allocation for leisure, transport and housing. While
household goods
stayed same
.Correct article usage
the same
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