A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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modern world is a challenging dilemma. Some

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argue that it is based on someone's social status or material possessions,

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other character values, like kindness, trust and honour are not as significant. I strongly agree with

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

social status
material possessions
old-fashioned values
honour
kindness
trust
empathy
media influence
self-worth
metrics of success
financial achievements
community contributions
superficial connections
emotional bonds
life satisfaction
stress and anxiety
policy changes
community programs
restoring balance
personal character

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Violent leisure programs has bad impacts on children. What are the causes and solutions for this problem?

Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources. Others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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