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the table illustrates the consumption of people in five countries in 2010.

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feeds and Tobacco

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in 2010.

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, drinks and tobacco was in Turkey about 32%, though, Sweden was

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, 28.91% and 18.80%

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Irland and Spain respectively.

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and teaching in Turkey was a significant decline in the period in question and stood at just 4.35%.

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, in Italy and Sweden about 3.2% of revenue

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, all percentages of apparel were between 5.4% for Sweden and 9% for Italy.