The graph shows the demand for energy and the energy available for fossil fuels in Freedonia from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph depicts the
demand
data in terms of the required energy
and the available energy
extracted from fossil fuels in Freedonia between 1985 and 2005,
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the energy
demand
ratio was low for a long period of time while
the rate of energy
availability was higher in the same period,
Glancing at the chart reveals that, in 1985 the demand
for energy
rate was nearly close to 400 billion
megajoules
,however
it plummeted in 1995 right after reaching the peak with bearly 700 Add the comma(s)
,however
billion
megajoules
, after 5 years of significant drop, the demand
ratio showed a steady pattern close to 3 billion
megajoules
, whereas
the energy
demand
was going down between 1985 and 1990, however
, after a steady period of 5 years roughly about 2 billion
megajoules
, the availability had shown a gradual increase starting from 2000 to reach its climax in 2005 with exactly 700 billion
megajoules
, to conclude
, the stock energy
was highly lower than the energy
accessibility between 1986 and a few years before 2000.Submitted by creativedesign1a9 on
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