The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The survey gives information about the long life of a large fish named
salmon
.
Overall
,
this
life cycle is comprised of
fry
to adult
salmon
which takes 3 steps and the cycle starts over again. In the beginning, baby salmons are named
fry
and their length is from 3 up to 8 cm living in a lower river, the water condition is different from other locations and it is fast flowing.
Moreover
,
fry
is living there approximately for 4 years.
After
this
, the
fry
turned into a smolt which is bigger than the
fry
and
also
their length is 12-15 cm.
Moreover
, they are heading to the open sea for 5 years. The
last
stage is when the smolt turned to adult
salmon
which are almost 60 cm larger and they are prepared to live in the open sea and relocated to the upper river which has slow-moving for reproduction for 5-6 months. They spread their
salmon
eggs in an area which contained a lot of reeds and under small stones, their eggs will be hidden and the cycle starts over again.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, fry with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • freshwater streams
  • small pebbles
  • reeds
  • alevin
  • yolk sac
  • nourishment
  • fry
  • grow stronger
  • grow larger
  • parr
  • defined markings
  • estuaries
  • smolt
  • adapt to saltwater
  • ocean
  • full size
  • sexual maturity
  • spawn
  • life cycle
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