The graph shows the demand for energy and the energy available for fossil fuels in Freedonia from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The graph gives information about the demand for
energy
and the energy
available for fossil fuels in Freedonia between 1985 and 2005.
Overall
, since both of them have fluctuated, the order between them is changing two times.
In 1985, in terms of the need for energy
, the amount of it was about 5.0, whereas
that of the energy
supply was under 4.0. In this
regard, the gap between them is almost 1 and a half.
contrary to 1985, in the middle of from 1985 to 1990, the amount of the supply overtook that of the requirement. In 1995, the amount of supply peaked at approximately over 6.0, whilst that of the energy
need was the lowest in 1995 about 2.0 and it caused the highest gap between them.
Between 1995 and 2005, they had different trends compared to the previous graph. The figure for the
availability shrank, Correct article usage
apply
while
that of the demand skyrocketed. Consequently
, the figure for the demand overtook that of the availability again.Submitted by ㅎ
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