The maps show the park which was built in 1920 and current construction of the park.
The given structures demonstrate Grange
Park
in different timelines. One
of the plans illustrates a current map, whereas
another one
was used in 1920.
Overall
, today's park
contains an underground entrance and a playground for children unlike the version of the park
when it first opened.
In general, three gardens of rose were located opposite to
each other in 1920 , but nowadays Change preposition
apply
one
of the gardens is replaced to centre
of the Add an article
the centre
park
. Now all of the special places for seating are situated in the centre around the garden in contrast
to before when four seats was
located Change the verb form
were
in
the East side. These days, the Amphitheatre for concerts is built Change preposition
on
instead
of a musician stage in Grange Park
.
The First opened park
had only two possible points to enter. Nowadays there is third
entrance with a parking area and it is located under the ground. The first plan of the Add an article
the third
a third
park
had a fountain in the centre, while
today's map contains water features in
Change preposition
apply
southwest
of the public Add an article
the southwest
park
. One
of the most important changes was in northwest
part of the Add an article
the northwest
park
, the pond for water plants was replaced by the playground.Submitted by 29th of april on
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