The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisonswhere relevant.

The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisonswhere relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisonswhere relevant.
the maps illustrate significant changes in the coastal
village
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of Seaville over thirty years period from 1980 to 2010.
it is clear that
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the
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developed substantially from a holiday settlement to a permanent town over 30 years .
similarly
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, infrastructure and amenities increased and
also
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increased the town's capacity to provide for visitors in 1980, the coastal
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of Seaville was tiny ,and all tourists are accommodated in cottages.
in contrast
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, the east bank was unspoilt. to the east of the cottages was a marsh,and there was woodland to the north .regarding entertainment ,
besides
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the sea, there was a tea room
in
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sand dunes.
however
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,the
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had grown dramatically by 2010. the retirement
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has been built to the west of the main road .in the west of the land , the permanent houses have been built in the place of the previous marsh and holiday cottages .
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,in the east of the land , the place of a tea room and sand dunes changed to hotel and restaurant,
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,and in the north of land a golf course has been constructed the and the boat club was sited in the southeast of the retirement
village
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "similarly".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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