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Some people believe that professional like doctors and engineers , should be required to work in the country where they training .Other believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish . discuss both side and give your opinion

#people #doctors #engineers #work #country #side
In
this
 present world , some experts like doctors can find
job
 positions in many
countries
 . Some
people
claims
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 that these professionals should work in the country they graduated in ,
However
, others hold opposing opinion and say
people
 had to be free to live anywhere they
pleased
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. In
this
essay
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 we will talk about
this
 debate .
To begin
 with , many
government
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 spend a considerable amount of money on
education
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 system . In these
countries
people
 can use scholarships to reach
higher
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a higher
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level
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 of education ,
due
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 to that there is a public expectation from the students who used
this facilities
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 to serve in their own
countries
 .
Secondly
 , in developing
countries
people
 like professors can play
a
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crucial rules by assisting other students to attain high levels of knowledge and
this
 progress can be very helpful for their society in
long
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terms
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. And these professors or other experts can earn excellent payments as
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a
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result of their services so both
people
 and these professionals gain benefits
On the other hand
 ,
due to
lack
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 of enough
job
 opportunities in some areas ,
people
 with university degrees can not find appropriate positions and they had to
left
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 their own motherland to find a
job
 .
For
instance
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 in some developing
countries
 in
Middle
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east
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 engineers were unable to find good jobs so they had to go to North America or other
countries
 in Europe .
Furthermore
 ,some experts can find better futures in other places of the world .
For example
 , doctors can receive payment five
time
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 more than their own nation in Canada and
as a
result
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 they prefer to
left
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leave
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 their motherland to have a better life situation .
To conclude
 ,
although
 it is essential for
people
 to serve their nation as
a an
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an
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honorable
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 duty , it seems reasonable for some of them to seek better life or
job
 opportunity in other states .
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