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Despite the increased access to education a significant number of people cannot read or write. What are the disadvantages and what action should the government take

#access #education #people #action #government
Nowadays, people have more
opportunity
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 to access different
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 of source information to gain
further
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, there is a fact that plenty of citizens
are still not have
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ability
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the ability
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 of reading or
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.
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 essay I will discuss the disadvantages of increased access to education. On the one hand,
unable
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being unable
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 to read or write is a barrier
of
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to
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 daily life. citizens have many hurdles in their life if they are illiterate. They can not protect themselves when
person
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a person
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 is facing
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a problem
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problem
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problems
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.
Individuals
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 unable to read the instructions of the machine. It causes
a
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serious
complication
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complications
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 and gets hurt.
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, a staff who has difficulty
in
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reading the warning and hazard signs of a product.
Also
, he could not understand the instruction
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 the product. He got
a
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hurt when he was using the machine.
Thus
, it causes
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trouble
in
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anytime
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. Government should provide a product learning class to the staff before they use it. It ensures the staff understand how to use
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it and
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 have a real demonstration.
On the other hand
, easily deceived by other to take
some
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advantage especially
illiterate
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the illiterate
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. Based on
this
 feature, the bad guy may provide some unclear documents to them and signs
it
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. It is a trap for them. They can not fight for it because of the defect.
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, Tim signed the contract which was an unfair contract. He could not fight for his profits. It might have a terrible influence on his later
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life
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 including
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 into a crime.
Therefore
, it increases the risk of
illiterate
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being illiterate
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 to a crime. Government should provide more consultation
session
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sessions
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 for them. It provides a chance for them to ask and learn the technique of
sign
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 a contract. In conclusion,
illiterate
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the illiterate
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 has a lot of
problem
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problems
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 when they can not know the meaning of words. Government should give more afford to illiterates
improve
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to improve
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 their life.
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