The bar chart shows the number of volunteers in New Zealand who helped in sports organizations in 2010. The pie chart illustrates the number of volunteers doing different types of jobs for that same period. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of people, who did volunteer work in sports organizations in 2010. The pie diagram depicts the types of jobs which had been done voluntarily for the same time period.
As can be seen from the bar graph, the vast majority of people
were couples
with dependent children, in fact, it constituted 49,8%. At the same time, the largest share of sport support roles in NSW was a coach instructor or teacher, which accounted for 206000. Change the verb form
coupled
In addition
, the household type such
as couples with no dependent children made up 26,6%, which is 2 times less than the previous category, furthermore
, the number of people who selected a committee member or administrator and scorer or timekeeper as the volunteer work was equal to 158 and 128 thousand, respectively. By contrast
, the share of one parent or lone person and other households was
accounted for from roughly 10% to 12%, Unnecessary verb
apply
additionally
, referee or umpire and medical support or other made up from 60000 to 100000.
In conclusion, the largest proportion of volunteers is from couples with dependent children and the most popular job is committee member or administrator.Submitted by nastyarozenson.17 on
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