The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
The diagrams illustrate the construction of the Secondary
School
which was situated at West Park
in 1950.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the changes of
Secondary Change preposition
in
School
. The process consists of three stages Fix the agreement mistake
Schools
such
as developing the car park
, sports field and science block whether removing the houses
and farmland
In terms of first
stage, there was a Change the article
the first
school
and playground on the right side, while
houses
and farmland were on the left side in 1950.Besides
, main
road was on the top side of the Change the article
the main
houses
and School
.
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Schools
Second
stage is that Change the article
The second
houses
were converted to
the car Change preposition
into
park
and science block
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blocks
as well as
the farmland turned
into a sports fieldAdd a missing verb
was turned
during
1980.
Change preposition
in
Moreover
, the school
developed to
a Change preposition
into
school
main building.
Third
and final stage, in 2010 car Add an article
The third
park
was expanded and was decreased the size of sports
field. Add an article
the sports
On the other hand
, main
road, Correct article usage
the main
school
main building, science block and playground remained unchanged.Submitted by opshorajhumpa2001 on
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