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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had Jett some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say where you think you Jett the papers • explain why they are so important • tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear sir, I would like to report
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lost property. It seems like I have left my file at your hotel.
This
 afternoon, I attended a meeting in room 301 around 3pm, my
papers
 were with me all the time during the meeting and
while
 discussing
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things, I put the
papers
 on the side table of the bed. Unfortunately, after the long meeting, I must have forgotten those
papers
 on that table. I must report those
papers
 to my boss and
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 were the main highlight of the whole meeting, So, I must sign
this
 business deal based on these
papers
. I can not take the risk to lose them. As you can imagine how important are those
papers
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 me. Would you kindly check
the
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room 301 and contact me on my cell phone with
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 2584693178 once you find those
papers
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 I will arrange the pickup and would really appreciate your efforts. Yours Sincerely, Natasha
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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