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Nowadays we see an increase in social problems involving teenagers. Many people believe that it is because parents spend more time at work and less with their children. Do you agree or disagree?

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the issue of whether increasing social problems involve
teenagers
 because their
parents
 focus on their work and take less care of their
kids
.From my point of view. I completely agree with the view that social issues involving
teenagers
 be increasing because
parents
 do not care about their
children
.
Firstly
, to become popular in social problems, whether
teenagersor
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teenagers or
teenagers
parents
, takes a lot of responsibility. One must be focusing on their
kids
 or learn to control themself act. not only is
this
 selfish attitude, it
also
 affects their mental health. if one hopes to reach the level of goodness,
parents
 must spend more time teaching
children
 to recognize what are positive and negative things.
secondly
, these
children
 to
deserve
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 be accompanied by
parents
 because
teenagers
 need to deal with some issues as soon as they are becoming an adult, they are subjected to constantly being pestered by harmful people who puzzle and deceive
teenagers
,
let
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 them become a part of social problems.
however
, making money is
also
 important, but I believe the future of
kids
 is priceless.
Therefore
, a life coach is difficult to act, as one must constantly be careful of
children
 who play with.
Finally
, youngsters
become
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becoming
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 straight shooters
mean
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means
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 that
parents
 regulated themself and spent more time with their
kids
. They have possessed a skill that like others own. In conclusion, I think that
parents
 must spend more time with their
children
.
While
 it seems like
parents
 doing more work to make more money for their
children
 to have a better life, after careful consideration, we realize that
children
 being positive is the most important thing in every family.
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