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today more and more tourists are visting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or Antarctic. What are the benefits disadvantaged for tourists who visit such places?

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Nowadays, many tourists want to visit a
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 with difficult conditions.
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 the South Pole of the Earth or the Sahara Desert. And of course, it will have pros and cons.
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 with the benefits, you can discover many new
places
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 and it can help you to get more knowledge and information about that
place
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. And these
places
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 are
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 suitable for those people who love to experience.
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, you can have a chance to level up your photography skills.
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, if you come to the hottest
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 on the Earth, the Sahara Desert, even if it will be very scorching for those people who love the novelty of different kinds of
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,
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 is an interesting
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 for them to visit.
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, it
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 has many dangers that we must face it. First thing, when you visit
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 like the jungle, you may see many kinds of animals
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 as snakes which can bite you if you don’t have a professional guide.
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if you go to a
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 like a big desert or have bad weather without preparing some necessary tools, that will
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 have a bad effect on the trip. In conclusion,
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 travelling in
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places
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 has a lot of good points, you will have to be careful about the negatives. You should research carefully the
places
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 you are going.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking landscapes
  • unique ecosystems
  • sense of adventure
  • personal growth
  • indigenous cultures
  • environmental conservation
  • climate change
  • environmental degradation
  • economically disadvantaged areas
  • physical health
  • harsh weather
  • difficult terrain
  • limited access to medical facilities
  • fragile ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
  • basic amenities
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