The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first diagram illustrates the process of
salmon
life, and the second diagram shows the size of Use synonyms
salmon
over Use synonyms
three
different periods.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
there are Linking Words
three
stages in the Use synonyms
salmon
life, beginning with a Use synonyms
salmon
egg and ending with Use synonyms
a
laying the egg. Correct article usage
apply
Salmon
live in Use synonyms
three
different places when they are in Use synonyms
three
different sizes.
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At the first stage
in Linking Words
salmon
life, the fry that size 3 to 8 cm live in the lower river which has fast flowing approx 4 years. Use synonyms
Then
the smolt when Linking Words
salmon
grow to 12 to 15 cm goes to open sea living. Approx 5 years later, Use synonyms
salmon
will be adult, and the size becomes 70 to 76 cm. Adult Use synonyms
salmon
go back to their birthplace upper river which is so slow-moving that helps adult Use synonyms
salmon
safely lay eggs under reeds and next to small stones. Use synonyms
Salmon
eggs will becomeUse synonyms
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