Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
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sugar
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and beverages today. The ensuing potential health problems should not be trivialised. There is an argument that if we raise the price of sugary Use synonyms
products
, people will naturally buy less of them. I completely disagree with Use synonyms
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view and believe that the focus of the solution to Linking Words
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problem should be on other areas.
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products
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foods
and drinks from consuming them. The companies that produce these Use synonyms
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measure may have more of a counter-productive effect, as the price goes up, people may save the money that should be spent on healthy Linking Words
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, in my opinion, alternative methods should be considered to tackle Linking Words
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problem. On the side of manufacturers, they should control the use of Linking Words
sugar
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sugar
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of regulating the prices of Linking Words
products
, a more necessary action would be to encourage people to have a healthier diet, getting Use synonyms
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, subsidising health-conscious companies is a good way to combat Linking Words
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sugar
in our markets, the possible health risks will automatically be avoided.
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products
and the host of related health problems that follow, I believe that simply raising prices is not going to work. Businesses and governments should take responsibility for addressing these issues at the root.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite