You should spend 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows the process for labeling shellfish for the international market. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words

You should spend 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram shows the process for labeling shellfish for the international market. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Write at least 150 words
The diagram demonstrates how shellfish
is
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labeled
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labelled
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to be sent out to the market. The process starts with catching them by Artisanal fishing boats and includes
labeling
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labelling
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, processing, and delivering. Each boat has a GPS location device to locate itself and is monitored automatically in Santiago. As they catch shellfish, they have to generate a barcode to certify the catch.
Then
catches go to the processing plant to be processed and make the final product.
Finally
, the certified
shellfishes
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shellfish
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are delivered to local and international consumers.
Overall
, shellfishes after catching by boats,
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are labeled
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labeled
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, processed, and at the final stage received by customers all around the world, and all the process is monitored in Santiago.
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