the following maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development
The geographical representation illustrates a small town called Islip as it is present as compared to the improvements made in the future.The number of apparatus has been introduced in the future to give the individuals comfort.
Overall
,Islip has experienced spectacular development along with
the introduction of many apparatus.
It is vividly seen that in the current scenario in the countryside
there is a number of shops on the North side of the township.The main road is located in the middle of the metropolis.It is connected to two ends of the road in the West to the school and in the East to the park.Add a comma
,countryside
Additionally
,housing apparatus are available across the main road near the shops.
Probing ahead, a large number of development is projected in the countryside.At the place of , the shops the bus station will be open.A shopping centre will be made between the bus station and the car park in the North direction.The new housing facilities are introduced near the park in the Southeast direction.Moreover
,more housing facility is estimated in the Northeast corner of the city.The dual carriageway will be projected.There will be pedestrians alongside the shopping centre for the people to move.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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