Discussion In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full-time. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

In the past few decades, the world has moved forward in the context of gender equality.

While

there has been a huge upsurge in the number of working

women

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witness many stay-at-home dads, stepping in to support the family. In

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I will discuss the contributors

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explain with examples why I strongly believe that it is a positive development for the household and the larger community. The primary reason

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men taking care of families these days

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is the availability of job opportunities for

women

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race is

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equally

educated and

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competitive

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and in some cases much better than their male

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.

Therefore

they are earning higher salaries and benefits than others.

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takes away the financial pressure from the family and

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both

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partners need not work.

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no house helps available in most

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countries, and it is only the parents responsible for

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of the children. So one of them

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to be available at all times. The biggest advantage of fathers staying at home is the bond that it creates between them and

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kids. Naturally children and closer to their

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, and one needs to put in

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to build

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relationship with

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. When the men are around children and spend time the

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little ones, the

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stronger

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and connect

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with them.

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, since the responsibilities are equally divided, the friction between the partners is

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reduced, thereby resulting in a healthy family environment.

Further

, we know that kids learn a lot from their surroundings. When these young minds see equality being

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at home, it will easily become a part of their nature. A recent survey

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demonstrated

that

chidren

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children

coming from families with working moms

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have higher consideration and respect for

women

. These individuals help shape the community and make

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world safe and right for everyone, irrespective of their gender. In conclusion,

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education has enabled mothers to work, and

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given the

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opportunities

to fathers to take care of the family.

This

is a very constructive change as it draws the family together and

also

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in

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making a better society.