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The chart gives information about how much energy of different categories produced in France over the period of 5 years.

The chart gives information about how much energy of different categories produced in France over the period of 5 years.
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The pie charts compare and contrast the five different ways
energy
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 was produced in
France
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 , which were measured in percentage , over
a
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an
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 11-
year
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 time period from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
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, most
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energy
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energies
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were
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was
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 produced by gas and coal in
France
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.
Whereas
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, the least
were
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was
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 from nuclear
source
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sources
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 and other sectors.
To begin
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 with, 29.63% and 29.80% of
energy
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 were produced from gas and coal in the initial
year
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 , and after 11 years it reported a slight increase in
energy
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 production in both sectors and
it
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which
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 accounted
30.31
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for 30.31
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% and 30.93% respectively. Meanwhile, the nuclear industry and other sectors were the areas that made up less source of
energy
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 in
France
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, and it was only 6.40% and 4.90% in 1995 .
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, in 2005 the
energy
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 production in those industries
had
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rose dramatically and reached 10.10% and 9.10% in that
year
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.
By contrast
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,
petro
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petrol
 was the second major source of
energy
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 production for
France
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 and it constituted 29.27% in 1995. But , after
a
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11 years , it comprised a significant fall in their rating and recorded 19.55% in the
last
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year
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, france, year with synonyms.
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