With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

Many

animals

are affected by

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activites

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activities

and

infratructure

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infrastructure

such

as urban development and illegal hunting. Those activities result in the losing

animals

'

foods

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and

house

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.

Moreover

, some kinds of

species

become extinct. In

this

essay, I will explain why

animals

have to be protected and recommend solutions which can keep

the

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safety of them. First of all,

animals

are keeping the

food-chain

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which controls the amount of each

species

in their ecosystem. It is

also

helpful to manage the number of natural plants without

human

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buget

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budget

.

However

, if their environment

are threaten

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by human, the natural systems can not operate

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given function.

Then

, some

of

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species

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the species

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rapidly increase or decrease

innaturally

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in naturally

naturally

unnaturally

, and it may influence

on

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other fields

such

as agriculture and trigger the extinction of other

species

. It requires

the

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large amount of financial

buget

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budget

to recover it.

Also

, in kinds of extinction, we can not revive dead

animals

.

Therefore

, people should pay attention to protecting

animals

. To prevent the

animals

, the government should improve legal sentences about

natural

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environment.

Legal

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restriction is essential for controlling immoral

human

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humans

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and companies which destruct

animals

'

habitat

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habitats

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and illegal hunting. If the government set high

fine

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and

long

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punishment

period

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, people can not do illegal actions even if they do not mind removing

the

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nature.

Also

, the government should make green areas where

animals

can construct

thier

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their

habitats without any threat. In conclusion,

guranteeing

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guaranteeing

the safety of

animals

is

improtant

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important

to

keep

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the natural systems

such

as

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the food-chain

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food-chain

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and maintaining the number of each

species

. To protect

animals

, intensive legal sentences should be given to control

human's

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illegal activities and

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green areas.