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The most positive event There are
moments
 in our life that remain in
the
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memory
 for a lifetime. It could be positive
events
as well as
 negative
events
. Details of these
moments
 erase from your
memory
 after
awhile
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 and only fragmentary memories remain, like frames from an old movie. I remember a lot of positive
events
 from my childhood, presents for birthdays from my parents, my friends and my school
time
. No doubt there were some negative
events
, failures and falls. But
usually
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 you memorize positive
moments
often
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 than negative
and
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ones and
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 keep them in your
memory
. One of the most positive and memorable
events
 in my life was the prom in the summer of 2000. I remember
,
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 it was a hot June’s day. The
party
 was held in one of the city restaurants and was organized by the parents of graduates. Before the
party
, the school principal congratulated us on our successful graduation and presented us with graduation diplomas. The girls were dressed in beautiful evening dresses and looked great. The
party
 started at 8 pm and lasted until dawn. All
this
time
 we were entertained by the DJ of the
party
, who held various funny contests. There were a lot of different snacks and drinks. Of course, the music didn't stop for a minute and the dancing continued all night. I looked at my classmates, charming girls and carefree guys and tried to fix these joyful
moments
 in my
memory
, realizing that
this
 event will never happen again. I was returning home after the
party
 at dawn and I was tired, joyful and happy. It was a wonderful end to a long school journey of 11 years. I saw many of my classmates for the
last
time
at
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this
 evening. Each of us went our own way, we entered different universities and a new interesting life began. Sometimes I remember that evening and joy and sadness fill my heart at the same
time
. It was a wonderful
time
 that was gone forever.
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