In many countries, people throw away a lot of food from restaurants and shops. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?

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food
industry has been a concern due
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rising demand.Many individuals waste
food
when they go dining
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a
resturant
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restaurant
or a public place.There are many
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reasons
for
this
,one of them is
due to
its storage and quality.In
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I will
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elaborate
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in addition
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reason other causes and ways to prevent them.
Firstly
,there are certain items that cannot be stored beyond a specific period of time.If we store them for long hours
it
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they
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looses
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its
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quality and flavour and
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rotten.
For example
, when we buy bread it comes with
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validity after that fungus starts growing over it and eventually
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of no use and we trash it.
Moreover
in
resturants
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restaurants
where they cook huge
amount
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amounts
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of items storing the
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leftovers
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will be a problem and they just throw the
food
.
For instance
, it has been reported in a recent newspaper the amount of
food
being dumped has increased to
aroung
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around
35% which leads to
loss
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a loss
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in
economy
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the economy
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.
On the contrary
, by taking steps we can overcome these problems.
To begin
,
people
can purchase items that can be stored for a longer period of time like
,
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frozen vegetables,paraths and so on. In doing so there is no fear
losing
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of losing
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the original quality of the item .
Secondly
,in dine-in
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the managers can serve
the
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food
to the poor
people
or send them to orphan homes where the hungry
people
can be
feed
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and in return get a token of appreciation.
To sum up
,in countries
people
to due lack
of
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knowledge about
the
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food
and its expire
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and
cooking large
amount
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amounts
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of
food
are some of the reasons
individulas
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individuals
tend to waste
food
. By feeding the poor and using frozen foods we as a citizen can prevent the damage caused
in
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by
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the
food
industry.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overproduction
  • inefficient
  • supply chains
  • perception
  • disposable
  • replaceable
  • awareness
  • education
  • regulations
  • redistribution
  • donation
  • portion control
  • inventory management
  • public awareness campaigns
  • attitudes
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