The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how frequently
people
take hot drinks such
as Tea and Coffee
in five cities of
Australia.
Change preposition
in
Firstly
, it is clear that
most men and women prefer to drink and spend some time in coffee
shops instead
of taking it away. Most people
went to take a coffee
or tea and bought an instant coffee
in the last
month.
Among the five cities, in four of them the rates of people
who went to a cafe for a drink is higher than others, as we can see Melbourn is at the top with above 60 per cent but in ,Adelaide it was seen that people
prefer to buy instant coffee
more than have cold drinks inside the coffee
shops, about 55 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
in Hobart took instant coffee
in last
4 weeks that is
the highest percentage among other 4 cities.
Overall
we can see that there are lots of people
who want to spend some times
in cofe Fix the agreement mistake
time
instead
of taking fresh drinks.Submitted by asgharrrlashkariii on
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