The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A given
the
map demonstrates a science part in 2008 and the present day . In general ,it is apparent that the park has become more developed for visitors with additional scientific space for Research and development , Correct article usage
apply
receiption
, station and innovation Correct your spelling
reception
centre
. The cyber
security and trees are not Correct article usage
Cyber
changes
over a period .
In 2008 , there was an IT Correct subject-verb agreement
change
centre
on the left side above a main road . There is a grove of trees on the left side of the IT centre
. Now , the name of this
place has changed to innovation
Correct article usage
an innovation
centre
. There are also
two additional buildings constructing
from the top and left of the diagram , sectioning off an area with grassland , Research and development and Wrong verb form
constructed
University
hub .
Correct article usage
a University
However
, in the top right corner of the picture , there are also
two supplementary things cycle path and bus
stop . Correct article usage
a bus
Moreover
, at the bottom of the map
a station was built in the middle of the railway today .Add a comma
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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