The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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map demonstrates a science part in 2008 and the present day . In general ,it is apparent that the park has become more developed for visitors with additional scientific space for Research and development ,

receiption

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reception

, station and innovation

centre

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security and trees are not

changes

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over a period . In 2008 , there was an IT

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on the left side above a main road . There is a grove of trees on the left side of the IT

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. Now , the name of

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place has changed to

innovation

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an innovation

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centre

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. There are

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two additional buildings

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from the top and left of the diagram , sectioning off an area with grassland , Research and development and

University

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hub .

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, in the top right corner of the picture , there are

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two supplementary things cycle path and

bus

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stop .

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, at the bottom of the

map

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a station was built in the middle of the railway today .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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175 words

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