The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A given
the
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apply
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map demonstrates a science part in 2008 and the present day . In general ,it is apparent that the park has become more developed for visitors with additional scientific space for Research and development ,
receiption
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reception
, station and innovation
centre
.
The cyber
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Cyber
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security and trees are not
changes
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change
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over a period . In 2008 , there was an IT
centre
on the left side above a main road . There is a grove of trees on the left side of the IT
centre
. Now , the name of
this
place has changed to
innovation
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an innovation
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centre
. There are
also
two additional buildings
constructing
Wrong verb form
constructed
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from the top and left of the diagram , sectioning off an area with grassland , Research and development and
University
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a University
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hub .
However
, in the top right corner of the picture , there are
also
two supplementary things cycle path and
bus
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a bus
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stop .
Moreover
, at the bottom of the
map
Add a comma
,map
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a station was built in the middle of the railway today .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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