Fast food is a part of life in many places. Some people think this has bad effects on lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree?

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Almost all people around the world eat fast

food

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and it has become one part of people’s

life

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. Many individuals believe that eating junk affects our lifestyle and diet badly. I completely agree with

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statement and in

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essay

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we read about why fast

food

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is in our

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life

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and what its effect on our

life

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. There are some reasons why junk

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has become a part of our daily

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, fast

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is one of the most delicious foods in the entire world, and

unfortunately

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we can not deny that.

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, the variety of choices for fast

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are

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many

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as burgers, pizzas,

sandwiches

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and sandwiches

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, they are made very fast and it is very good for people who are always in a hurry and want to just have their lunch or dinner. So,

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time goes on it has taken a part of our

life

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junk

food

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is very delicious and virtually all people like it, it has very bad effects on our lifestyle and diet. Eating fast

food

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as a routine leads to high blood pressure and obesity.

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, it doesn’t have any vitamins and it

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apply

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lack of nutrition.

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, in the long

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it affects our performance in any area like

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a workout

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workout

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workouts

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and working

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working

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. Unfortunately, the effects

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show in the short term. In conclusion, eating fast

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has become our routine

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and

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effects on our

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precisely in diet and lifestyle is very bad.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

246 words

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Fast food is a part of life in many places. Some people think this has bad effects on lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree?

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