Some people think that secondary schools should spend less time teaching traditional subjects like history and spend more time on teaching subjects like communication skills and business. Do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is widely believed secondary schools should spend less
time
teaching traditional subjects
like history
and spend more time
on
teaching Change preposition
apply
subjects
like communication skills
and business. Personally, I can neither completely agree nor disagree with this
statement for a variety of reasons.
I partly agree that secondary school should more
spend less Correct quantifier usage
apply
time
on teach
Change the verb form
teaching
subjects
like communication skills
and business than more teach traditinal
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traditional
subjets
like Correct your spelling
subjects
history
. One of the main reasons can be that children will development
more Replace the word
develop
skills
when going out in society. This
means that they have some experience about
their job in the future. Another reason can be that there were many surveys of students Change preposition
in
this
age expressing in addition
to adding more elective
.
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electives
On the other hand
, I disagree with the viewpoint that secondary schools spend less time
teach
traditional Change the form of the verb
teaching
subjects
. Firstly
, they will forget the traditions of the nation . This
is because today's teenagers are following technology but gradually forgetting the national origin of the country, which will make them lose their gratitude for the merits of the heroes of the past who stood up for the independence of the nation. Secondly
, if children don’t learn traditional subjects
like history
, they will lose their national pride.
In conclusion, although
children like learning subjects
communication
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of communication
skills
and business, I’m convinced that secondary schools shouldn’t spend less time
teaching traditional subjects
like history
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