Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty per cent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world?

The

loss

of

wildlife

has become a major issue in the

last

century. Recent studies show that the

wildlife

population

has halved over the

last

five decades. In

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I will delve into the main reasons why

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preserving

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wildlife

. The exponential rise of

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population

has been one of the main problems that

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led to the dip

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wildlife

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population

. Despite the numerous matters that might be blamed for the upsurged extinction of

wildlife

species, overpopulation has to be considered

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the most important one. In fact, the rise of

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population

from 1 to 8 billion people has brought

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many changes that are linked to the

loss

of habitat for

wildlife

.

For instance

, deforestation has been constantly increasing

due to

the necessity of creating more

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for intensive farming and producing highly sold plants;

such

as palm oil.

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linkage between overpopulation and

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of

wildlife

population

.

This

problem

can be addressed in many ways.

Firstly

, education is a powerful tool to make people understand not only the origins of what they eat and drink but

also

the consequences of their choices.

Secondly

, finding innovative and sustainable manners to produce supplies and goods will make necessary less space in order to produce the great amount of food that will be needed in the future to feed the global

population

.

Lastly

, governments should create more strict laws to preserve and protect endangered species and habitats. In conclusion, even If the current data about

wildlife

loss

are extremely worrying,

this

problem

could be tackled in many efficient ways. Both people and governments should focus on the possible solutions to

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problem

in a radical way

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because

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time is running out and too many species are going extinct.