Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty per cent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world?

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has become a major issue in the

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century. Recent studies show that the

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population

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has halved over the

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five decades. In

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has occurred and the manners in which we can tackle

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wildlife

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. The exponential rise of

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has been one of the main problems that

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led to the dip

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. Despite the numerous matters that might be blamed for the upsurged extinction of

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species, overpopulation has to be considered

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the most important one. In fact, the rise of

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from 1 to 8 billion people has brought

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many changes that are linked to the

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of habitat for

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, deforestation has been constantly increasing

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the necessity of creating more

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for intensive farming and producing highly sold plants;

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as palm oil.

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linkage between overpopulation and

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of

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population

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.

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can be addressed in many ways.

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, education is a powerful tool to make people understand not only the origins of what they eat and drink but

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the consequences of their choices.

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, finding innovative and sustainable manners to produce supplies and goods will make necessary less space in order to produce the great amount of food that will be needed in the future to feed the global

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, governments should create more strict laws to preserve and protect endangered species and habitats. In conclusion, even If the current data about

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loss

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are extremely worrying,

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could be tackled in many efficient ways. Both people and governments should focus on the possible solutions to

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in a radical way

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because

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time is running out and too many species are going extinct.