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Writing Samples
Band 3.5

plan Abelow shows a health centre in 2005.plan b shows the same place in the present day.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,make comparisons where relevant.

The geographical representation illustrates the changes made in a health
centre
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 in 2005 as compared to the present scenario.
Overall
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, the health
centre
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 had experienced spectacular development
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 the introduction of many facilities.The minor operations
room
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 has been constructed in the present scenario. In 2005,in ,south there was a car parking area was there where people can park their cars.There was a physiotherapy
room
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 in the northeast and a garden was located in the northwest direction of the
centre
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.
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,both consulting room1 and 2 were situated in the east and consulting
room
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 3 was located in the southwest. Probing ahead, the garden has been chopped down and minor operations
room
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 has been built in place.
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,the location of the reception
room
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 has been changed.The children's play area is have been constructed in place of consulting
room
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 3.
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,the entrance to a health
centre
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 is transformed by consulting rooms 1 and 2.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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