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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar chart gives information on the number of people who studied full-time or part-time divided by gender in the UK from the 1970s to the 1990s.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 both genders trained full-time rather than part-time. Most
of
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females
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 studied full-time and part-time in
1990s
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. In
case
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 of males, the largest number of males studied part-time in the 1970s
while
 the men who learned full-time were the most in the 1990s.
According to
 the graph, the population of women who studied full-time increased rapidly nearly from 100
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 to 200
thousands
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 between the 1970s and the 1980s. At the same time, the number of those
studied
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part- time
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 went up and it soared from 800
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 to 1100
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 between the 1980s and the 1990s.
On the other hand
, the population of males gradually rose about from 100
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 to 200
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thousands
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.
However
, the figure for men who
studies
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 part-time fluctuated. It decreased from 1000
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 to nearly 900
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 between the 1970s and the 1980s, but the figure minimally increased again from the 1980s to the 1990s.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • engaged in
  • distinct
  • categorizes
  • enrollment status
  • surpass
  • compared to
  • stability
  • increased significantly
  • equal number
  • gap
  • outnumber
  • decreased
  • part-time courses
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