Young people are much more awareofand concernedabout issues likethe environment, poverty, and animal weljarethan previous generations. Whatisyour own opinion?
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Nowadays, young
mans
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men
worries
about animals, our environment and poor mans a lot. Change the verb form
worry
For example
, Greta Trounberg, who talks about this
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entire
world, Add an article
the entire
also
organizations like GreenPeace
are taking their places more and more still the time, and everyone can have the question, why does Correct your spelling
Greenpeace
this
happen and what this
causes? Let's talk about this
.
First
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The first
reason
why youngs
cares about that, Correct your spelling
young
because
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is because
planet
, Earth, needs help. We, humans, just a
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apply
one
species of animal changes
the Change the verb form
change
eco system
of the Correct your spelling
ecosystem
planet
horrifyingly, for example
, on one
island lived birds named Dodo, they lived on their island and didn't hurt anyone, but one
day on that land came one
expedition and people have noticed about this
species, and in just 50 years the entire population of Dodo was exterminated, and by exterminated I mean, that on our planet
Dodo are
not exist anymore. Change the verb form
is
This
shows us, how our human race can destroy our planet
, so first
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the first
reason
is guilt for our ancestors, who damaged and still damage our planet
.
Second
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The second
reason
is making our planet
to place, where everyone can live even after million
years, because if we don't change anything our world can collapse in the next 100 years. For you to understand, the common temperature on our was increased by 1.3 degrees Celsius, in first look it can make Correct article usage
a million
you
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your
illusion
, that it's not something to mention, but because of Correct article usage
the illusion
this
- glaciers on
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in
the
Antarctica are melting, and Correct article usage
apply
this
highering the water level of seas, and if we do nothing the entire surface of the earth will be flooded with water, so the second reason
is responsibilty
and will to make a good environment for future generations.
So, Correct your spelling
responsibility
reason
, why people Correct article usage
the reason
worries
about Change the verb form
worry
planet
must be guilt for our ancestors and responsibility for future generations. At Correct article usage
the planet
last
, this
trend can change the world amazingly, because, to be honest, our planet
really needs changes, especially towns, cities, and even urbans
and villages, because Correct your spelling
urban
by
factories and facilities like Change preposition
of
them
the air Add a comma
,them
have
been polluted and Change the verb form
has
breating
in big settlements became dangerous. Correct your spelling
breathing
For example
, in countries like Japan, USA
, Britain and other Correct article usage
the USA
higt-tech
countries are appears Correct your spelling
high-tech
tresh
cans for every type of Correct your spelling
trash
garpage
, for plastic, like bottles, for paper, for glass, and Correct your spelling
garbage
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