The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart demonstrates the average weekly expenditure of families in a single country on 8 different categories in 50 years apart period, 1968 and 2018. The spending was measured as a percentage of the weekly income.
At first glance, it can be seen that, in 1968, the majority of weekly spending was on
Food
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whereas
it was spent on Linking Words
Leisure
in 2018. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
Food
, Fuel and power, Clothing and Use synonyms
footware
, and Personal goods were higher in 1968, Correct your spelling
footwear
however
, Housing, Transport, and Linking Words
Leisure
had more expenditure in 2018. Use synonyms
In addition
, for Household goods, it was equal in both 1968 and 2018.
In terms of Linking Words
Food
, people spent 35% of their weekly income in 1968, Use synonyms
while
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on the other hand
, they spent around 17% in 2018. Linking Words
Similarly
, there was a 2% difference in Fuel and Power between 1968 and 2018, at 5% and 3% respectively. Linking Words
Moreover
, regarding Clothing and Linking Words
footware
, the record declined by half from 10% in 1968 to 5% in 2018.
In 2018, residents focused most of their spending on Correct your spelling
footwear
Leisure
and Housing. Concerning Use synonyms
Leisure
, it can be viewed that there was more than twice an increase between 1986 and 2018. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the amount spent on Housing was almost two times in 2018 compared to 1968. In Transport, the cost spent doubled in 2018 at 14% Linking Words
while
it was 7% in 1968.
In summary, there was Linking Words
overall
spending on Linking Words
Food
at 35% in 1968, Use synonyms
while
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in contrast
, most of the population spent on Linking Words
leisure
at 23% in 2018.Use synonyms
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