Some believe children should be taught to give speeches and presentations in school. Why is this? What other skills do you think it is important to be taught in schools?

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Few people think that kids should be taught to give speeches and presentations in their earlier schooling.
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they can enhance their communication
skills
,
while
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skills
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to be taught
along with
public speaking
such
as recreational activities.
To begin
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a huge role to play in
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life's development. When
children
learn how to speak in front of
audience
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an audience
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in their initial period they gain
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confidence in their public speaking ability and become
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good
communicator
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communicators
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as well as
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great
leader
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leaders
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in upcoming future.
For example
, in general,
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a student
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student
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students
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who gave presentations and speeches in their primary and secondary schools perform well in their
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careers
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become
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great
negotiator
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also
.
That is
why, the onus is on parents and teachers to teach them how to speak and behave in front of
audience
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an audience
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.
Although
communication
skills
are of
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great importance, recreational activities
also
have to be taught
along with
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. Activities like sports, music, and drama
also
play a vital role in
children
's development. These
skills
enhance
student's
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students'
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every aspect and make them better individuals for
future
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the future
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.
Moreover
,
children
should need different skillset
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their whole life to prosper and so for
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they have to
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these
skills
also
.
For instance
, when
children
gain knowledge about several
skillsets
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skill sets
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, they have a great portfolio of
skills
which they can use to get a
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scale job and
also
secure their future without
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on
single
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skill. In conclusion, even though presenting yourself in front of
audience
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have great importance for becoming a great individual, for holistic development, kids should be taught other
skills
also
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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