Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter -give the details of your train trip -describe the luggage you left on the train -say what actions you want him/her to take.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report and seek your help regarding my luggage that I forgot

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the train. I was travelling from Rome to Milan

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morning

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high-speed

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the high-speed

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train which departed from the Rome Termini station at 9:00 AM. My seat number was 95A in coach 10. I was carrying one trolley

bag

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of medium size which I stored in the compartment above the seat. It is

four-wheeled

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a four-wheeled

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bag

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with

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a plastic

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body, and it is of dark

gray

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color

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with white stripes. There is a built-in lock on the right side of the

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and the side handle which is

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black, and some letters are written over it.

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, a

contact

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tag is attached to the handle that has all the details like my name,

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number and email. I would really appreciate it if you can

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the responsible personnel to inquire about

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luggage and

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me as soon as you have some information. Please

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give me the exact location of the office where I can come and collect the

bag

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once found. I look forward to

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from you. Yours sincerely, Farhat Abbas

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

194 words

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Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter -give the details of your train trip -describe the luggage you left on the train -say what actions you want him/her to take.

Car ownership has increased rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that goverment should make it free for all student no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that elders should be cared at home with family members. Others think that they should be kept at nursing homes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that public libraries are an important public resource and should be free. Others say that they are just a waste of public money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that countries should produce foods their population eats and import less food as much as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?