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Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter -give the details of your train trip -describe the luggage you left on the train -say what actions you want him/her to take.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report and seek your help regarding my luggage that I forgot
in
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on
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 the train. I was travelling from Rome to Milan
this
 morning
in
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on
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high-speed
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the high-speed
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 train which departed from the Rome Termini station at 9:00 AM. My seat number was 95A in coach 10. I was carrying one trolley
bag
 of medium size which I stored in the compartment above the seat. It is
four-wheeled
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a four-wheeled
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bag
 with
plastic
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a plastic
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 body, and it is of dark
gray
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grey
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color
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 with white stripes. There is a built-in lock on the right side of the
bag
 and the side handle which is
colored
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in
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black, and some letters are written over it.
Moreover
, a
contact
 tag is attached to the handle that has all the details like my name,
contact
 number and email. I would really appreciate it if you can
contact
 the responsible personnel to inquire about
this
 luggage and
contact
 me as soon as you have some information. Please
also
 give me the exact location of the office where I can come and collect the
bag
 once found. I look forward to
hear
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 from you. Yours sincerely, Farhat Abbas
Submitted by mic.jan.thomas on

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