Many jobs used to be done at home by hands but nowadays, increasing number of them are done by machines instead. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this.

Technology
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made
great
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impact on the development
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various fields. In the past, many works are done with the help of
hand
, but nowadays,
machines
are required to complete a task. It has both
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and cons which I will discuss below. On the first
hand
, there are few drawbacks of using machine
equipments
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because there will be few job opportunities
,
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if all activities are done by machine.
For instance
, In many big multinational companies
such
as Mac Donald's and Pizza World have kept
robot
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robots
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to serve and
as well as
to make
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food's
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,
from
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this
worker's
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do not have enough work to do. If all
task
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tasks
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are done by
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a robot
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robot
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robots
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,there will be no use of
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the hand
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hand
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.
Therfore
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Therefore
,there will be
increasement
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increment
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a
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poverty
due to
less vacancy
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fewer vacancies
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of
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a job.
On the other
hand
, there
are
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more
benefit
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of using
machines
because it can save
time
.
For instance
,In Asia there will be
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limit for work from 10:am to 4:00 pm and by just clicking on
machines
, it can complete task as soon as possible.
However
, people can give
time
to their family and
also
enjoy their day at leisure period. Aditionally, use of
machines
have made people life easy and comfortable.
To conclude
, technology have positive aspect on people's life because it can save enough
time
. It has more advantages rather than disadvantages.
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