The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
number
of
labours
and factories in England and Wales in the period during the period from 1851 to 1901. Looking at the chart from an
overall
perspective, the
number
of employees and factories showed a downward trend in the period given. Both male and female
labours
saw decreasing trends in 50
years
. The
number
of male
labours
stood at 287,100, which was the highest in both genders in 1851 after which became approximately a fifth in three decades. (80,123 in 1871)
This
gradually inclined to 65,000 in 1891 before dropping dramatically to 31,000 in 1901.
Similarly
, the figure for female employees, which accounted for 190,000 plunged to just 60,000 in 30
years
and
then
it reached the lowest of 30,000 in the two categories.
Due to
the decline in
labours
, the total fell to only 61,000 in 1901 from 477,100 in 1851.
Conversely
, there was a noticeable increase in factories in five decades. The
number
started at 225 in 1851 and
then
stabilized in the first 10
years
.
However
, it suddenly skyrocketed to 721 in the next two decades before dramatically decreasing by approximately 120 and reaching 600 in 1901, which meant the figure almost tripped over the
years
.
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