The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned 

future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 

make comparisons where relevant
The pictures depict how an Industrial
area
of
Norbiton
change from today to future development.
Overall
, today’s industrial
area
of
Norbiton
is dominated by factories in the southern part of the
river
and farmland in the northern
river
. In the future,
however
,
this
site is projected to build new buildings including housing, a school, a playground, shops, and a medical centre. As can be seen from the given pictures that today’s industrial
area
of
Norbiton
is surrounded by factories. A roundabout is located in the centre of the industrial
area
between the main road and the
river
. In the future, it is planned that the northern
river
will be built housing by eliminating farmland
area
. The northern
area
,
on the other hand
, will be equipped with some buildings starting from a playground in the south of the roundabout.
Then
, a school is expected to be built in the eastern part of the roundabout. Another new development is
that
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the medical centre that will be located between the main road and the roundabout
as well as
shops in the western part of the roundabout.
In addition
, the housings are projected to be built in the west
area
of
Norbiton
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, norbiton, river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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