The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart illustrates the
amount
of males and females studying Change the quantifier
number
further
education whether full or part-timetime
in three different periods in Britain.
Correct your spelling
part-time time
part-time-time
Overall
, it is clear that
women full-time education increased dramatically while
men's trend experienced fewer changes.
According to
the data, during the years 1970 and 1971
there were 1000 men who were studying full time but in the next two decades, it fluctuated, Add a comma
,1971
while
the amount
of male Change the quantifier
number
students
studying part-timetime
flew gradually, as it is given from 100 Correct your spelling
part-time time
part-time-time
students
in1970 it increased to 200 students
at the end
.
As it is given amount of women who were studying full time escalated sharply. At
the ,Change preposition
In
begining
there was just 650 female studying full time, but Correct your spelling
beginning
at
the 1980 and 1990 decades it increased by more than 1000 Change preposition
in
students
. Women studying part-timetime
experienced Correct your spelling
part-time time
part-time-time
also
a growth especially
in 1980.Add the comma(s)
,especially
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