The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table below explains the amount of male, and female, employees and
factories
in two countries ( England and Wales) between 1851 to 1901.
Overall
, there was a sharp decrease in both male and female employees and
factories
from 1851 to 1901, but women experienced more than the other two. In 1851 there were exactly 287 thousand male workers as is given it declined through the years and in 1901 there were just 31,000 employers which
mean
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nearly 10 times fewer compared to the beginning. women's employers experienced
also
a decrease, the peak was between 1860 to 1870 the number of employers decreased sharply from 160,000 to 100,000 which is a massive number. Amount of
factories
fluctuated during these decades, but we can see there is an increase of nearly 350
factories
at the end
of 1901 compares to the beginning of 1851 when there were just 225
factories
. As it is given there is a significant decrease in total employees number, there were almost 470,000 labours in 1851 but in the ,end it was approximately 61,000.
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