The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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goods
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transportation in the UK from 1974 to 2002 through various modes of transportation namely road,
water
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, rail and
pipeline
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. In general, the quantities of materials transported increased in all types of transportation types over the years. Looking at the details,
goods
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brought through road transport swelled significantly from about 70
million
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tons
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in 1974 to about 95
million
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tons
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in 2002, approximately 25
million
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tons
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higher than in 1974. The same trend was true for both
water
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and
pipeline
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goods
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carrying.
Water
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shipping distributed about 39
million
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tons
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of materials in 1974 and about 62
million
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tons
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in 2002.
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Pipeline
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showed the same trend despite the figure
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goods
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carried
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roughly slower than
water
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transport,
pipeline
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media only moved about 2
million
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tons
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in 1974 and about 21
million
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tons
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in 2002.
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, the number of commodities brought through rail mode fluctuated gradually. It was about 40
million
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tons
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in 1974 and went down modestly by the year
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1978 and
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quantity fluctuated until it levelled up to about 41
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tons
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in 2002. It accounted for a small change indeed, only about 1
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tons
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over the year.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, water, pipeline, million, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 9 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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