The graph below gives information from a 2008 report on the consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections till 2030.

The graph below gives information from  a 2008 report on the consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections till 2030.
The line graph shows a 2008 study on US
energy
consumption since 1980 with predictions until 2030. Units are measured in
quadrillions
.
Overall
, it is evident that
petrol
and
oil
were the categories that consumed the highest
energy
from the past till the future.
Whereas
hydropower remains insignificant throughout the period. In 1980
petrol
and
oil
recorded the largest use of power in the USA with, 35 quadrillion units. Natural
gas
and coal are followed by 20
quadrillions
and around 16
quadrillions
respectively. Nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower were the categories which utilized the least significant amount of
energy
, accounting for figures below 5
quadrillions
each.
Energy
utilization of
petrol
and
oil
fluctuates for some years after which it began to grow gradually. By 2030, it is foreseen that
petrol
and
oil
will continue to lead USA
energy
utilization with around 50 quadrillion units.
Furthermore
, coal and natural
gas
expenditures of power
also
varied for a
while
. It is projected that coal use of
energy
will increase
whereas
natural
gas
energy
expenditure will remain static. By 2030 coal will be the second highest
energy
consumption with approximately 25 quadrillion and natural
gas
will followed. The least significant group which were Nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower recorded a constant figure for years. In the
future
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all these 3 groups are predicted to use around 5
quadrillions
or less each.
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  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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