The plans below show the layout of a university's sport center now and how it looks after the redevelopment.

The given plans show the design now and how after the reconstruction.
Overall
, it can be seen that
,
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apply
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the sport
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sport
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sports
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center
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will be more attractive with different types of facilities.
Firstly
,
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, changing room and seating area will remain unchanged. But the area of
gym
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the gym
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at
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the north side will expand and
outdoor
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the outdoor
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courts
that
is
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beside the seating hall will change by
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the sport
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sport
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sports
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hall and
dances
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dance
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studios at the North East corner. Two
néw
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new
changing
room
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will introduce on South East and South West corner. A cafe and sports shop will introduce at the entrance of
sports
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the sports
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center
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centre
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. The outdoor at West Side will
changed
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by
leisure
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the leisure
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pool.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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