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Some people say that public libraries should be free; otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the internet allow easy access to resources. Discuss and give your point of view. Opinion, for and against essay

#people #libraries #waste #money #technologies #internet #access #resources #point
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A bunch of
people
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 think that if public
libraries
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 are not free
then
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 it's just a waste of
money
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 because they are exposed to technology which allows them to get easy access to everything. I prefer it should put some fees or make any passes to maintain the
library
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as well as
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 get new stuff. First of all, paying some
money
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 to
libraries
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 allows them to maintain the service. A
library
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 is a place which gives proper ambitions to everyone so that, they can sit and read
books
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.
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, the librarian who works the whole day needs
money
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 for his work there it is the help of the government as well if
people
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 pay some
money
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 for the
library
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.
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, the
library
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 provides many new
books
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 to readers who
also
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 can borrow
books
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 from there. It
also
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 helps needy
people
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 who don't afford to buy new
books
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 . In recent study prove that 70% of
people
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 make their career through
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libraries
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books
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 because they can use them and get easily them and the
money
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 they want to spend on
books
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 they use for other works . In conclusion,
although
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 some
people
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 oppose the idea of paying
money
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 for
libraries
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, it's worth it if they pay
money
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 for
libraries
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