Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents are better caregivers for their young children. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is argued by parents that, childcare centres are recommended for preschool-
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offspring,
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employed parents believe that family members can be better caretakers considering the young
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of the
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. I believe that,
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at daycare learn life
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as independence and discipline if they are nurtured at home by elder family members considering the young
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of toddlers it will be of much benefit. On the one hand,
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attending daycare learn discipline and become independent.
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is because, there are trained professionals who have studied
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behaviours, and know how to engage
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in activities that develop their life
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. They encourage
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to play in groups which imbibe communication
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, childcare centres maintain a daily schedule which each
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follows, which in turn inculcates discipline and individuality in them.
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, every
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is unique, and their learning capabilities differ so in
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scenario working parents think that
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must be taken care of by elders at home.
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, family members not only shower love and affection on their grandchildren but are
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aware of the
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's needs. Some
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communicate at an early
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some do not and in
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,case elders at home who take care of the
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know what they need and the things they adore the most.
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, a
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shows interest in selected rhymes
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and enjoys them to the fullest, the moment we play rhymes they cheer up and become active if they are sick or upset. In conclusion, even though,
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at care centres learn various
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at a young
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I argue that if we have the possibility of elders caring for grandchildren we should go with it as love, affection and individual attention are what a toddler needs the most.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • structured environment
  • professional care
  • developmental stages
  • cognitive development
  • physical development
  • social development
  • social interaction
  • communication skills
  • teamwork
  • community belonging
  • personalized care
  • affectionate care
  • family bonds
  • emotional security
  • transmission
  • family values
  • traditions
  • pedagogical methods
  • child psychology
  • flexibility
  • educational development
  • social skills
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