The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropology in work after five years.

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the given pie chart and table illustrate the destination of anthropology graduates from a particular university after their graduation and their salary of them.
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a little more than fifty per cent were able to find a full-time job ,
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only 5% of them could have a part-time job and continue their postgraduate study. the part-time workers and unemploy show approximately a similar percentage
that is
15% and a little less than it. the full-time postgraduate study and unknown are shown exactly a little less than ten per cent by the chart.
besides
these, the table shows a range of wages of anthropology graduates after 5 years. in the part of salaries,the two lowest items under $50,000 are freelance consultants and the government sector at 5%
in contrast
they have the two highest fees over $100,000 at 40% and one-second per cent,in ,addition
although
private companies have a high a number of salaries between $25,000 and $74,999, it has the lowest incomes over $75,000 and $100,000 that are a quarter % and 30%.
overall
we can see that the full-time job has the highest number of interests compared to the part-time and postgrad study which is the lowest.,
Moreover
the government sector has the biggest number of incomes over $100,000,though it
also
has the lowest ones under $50,000
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