The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropology in work after five years.

the given pie chart and table illustrate the destination of anthropology graduates from a particular university after their graduation and their salary of them.
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a little more than fifty per cent were able to find a full-time job ,
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only 5% of them could have a part-time job and continue their postgraduate study. the part-time workers and unemploy show approximately a similar percentage
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15% and a little less than it. the full-time postgraduate study and unknown are shown exactly a little less than ten per cent by the chart.
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these, the table shows a range of wages of anthropology graduates after 5 years. in the part of salaries,the two lowest items under $50,000 are freelance consultants and the government sector at 5%
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they have the two highest fees over $100,000 at 40% and one-second per cent,in ,addition
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private companies have a high a number of salaries between $25,000 and $74,999, it has the lowest incomes over $75,000 and $100,000 that are a quarter % and 30%.
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we can see that the full-time job has the highest number of interests compared to the part-time and postgrad study which is the lowest.,
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the government sector has the biggest number of incomes over $100,000,though it
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has the lowest ones under $50,000

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