The graph below shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002

The line chart illustrates the weight of certain objects travelling

the

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in the

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United Kingdom from 1974 to 2002. The graph is measured in

million

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millions

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of tonnes.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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2 paragraphs

26 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

amount
transported
UK
increased
significantly
28-year period
first decade
steady increase
significant jump
highest point
gradual decline
minor increase
dropped
similar level
goods

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