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The graph below shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002

The graph below shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002
The line chart illustrates the weight of certain objects travelling
the
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in the
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 United Kingdom from 1974 to 2002. The graph is measured in
million
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millions
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 of tonnes.
Overall
Linking Words
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • amount
  • transported
  • UK
  • increased
  • significantly
  • 28-year period
  • first decade
  • steady increase
  • significant jump
  • highest point
  • gradual decline
  • minor increase
  • dropped
  • similar level
  • goods
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