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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture illustrates the layout of
sport
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the sport
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 facility in the University at
this
 moment, and changes will have been done after redevelopment.
It is clear that
 the University
sport
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sports
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center
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centre
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 is expected to take more place and different fitness goods will have been
build
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building
built
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 up.
Furthermore
, outdoor courts will not be in the future. At
this
 time, the layout of
fitness
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the fitness
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center
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centre
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 of the university presents a reception,
in
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and in
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 the east of the building there is a seating area. A changing room is placed on the
north west
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northwest
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 of the facility. Between
seating
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the seating
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 area and changing
room
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,room
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 there is a
25 metered
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25-metered
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pool
. A gym is located in front of the reception, near the
pool
 area. The fitness
center
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centre
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 is located in the middle of
the middle of
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apply
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two courts.
By contrast
, future plans for the universities
sport
 complex involve two dance studios, a café,
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a sport
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sport
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sports
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 shop, added changing rooms, a
sport
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sports
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 hall and a leisure
pool
. On the right corner of
entrance
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the entrance
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 there is the café, in front of it there presents the sports shop. What about the changing rooms, they will have been manufactured on
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
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various sites of the complex. The new dance studios are placed on the east
site
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side
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 of the
sport
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sports
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 facility. The leisure
pool
 is expected
been
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to be
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 located on the west part of the building.
In addition
, the gym,
the
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and the
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 reception will not see any chance, despite the adding some space.
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